Cuddled to my pillow, I lie so still
Half Awake –as in chemistry class;
The lone myna on my window sill
Rhythmically pecks on the tinted glass.
In chorus my neighbor’s cocks crow shrill;
I look up the skylight- two herons pass.
The wavy silhouette of a far off hill-
Sleeping in peace like a curvy lass.
The early breeze is fresh and chill
Caressing the dew drops on the grass;
It eases through the bamboo frill-
Soothing the soul like Ilayaraja’s bass.
The mongrels bond and bark at will
To greet the milkman’s chiming brass;
I flip my pillow for a cooler quill-
Soaked in the moment’s languid jazz.
I yawn and soon I yearn for a fill-
Coffee in bed is not so crass!
I snuggle, nuzzle and laze until
My mobile rings to break the impasse.
[one of my favorites from my archives, 09.05.2011]
Fantastic Ashok! You brought a very practical dawn beautifully :)
ReplyDeletenice that you have time to listen to a myna!
ReplyDeleteOtherwise how are you?
Mugundhan Varadanarayanan
A beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely poem and a beautiful photograph.
ReplyDeletesounds like a nice way to start a day!
ReplyDeleteMy friend,
ReplyDeleteI could just study this picture and write love poetry. Great picture!!
Beautiful poem, Ashok!!! Amazing photograph!!!
ReplyDeleteThat was really a nice read and the foto adds extra flavor to it.....
ReplyDeleteBTW thanks for stopping by....hope to see you more there...)
Best wishes,
irfan.
Nice to meet you Irfan!
Deletea brilliant poem!
ReplyDeletevery beautiful!
One of my favourite places to be is cuddled to my pillow. Such lovely words, thanks for sharing them.
ReplyDelete"Dawn" poem and photo are lovely!
ReplyDeletein one word..super..
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, full of sentiment..and creates a lot of images in one's head !
ReplyDeleteI can see why its one of your favorites. It's lovely. One of my favorites too now.
ReplyDeleteThe poem is wonderful! And what a gorgeous shot that is. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteamazing work you have accomplished!!!
ReplyDeleteI haven't read the poem yet! But, nice picture of dawn.
ReplyDeleteLovely image and rhythmic verse
ReplyDeleteAshok,
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...
Life is so busy most of us fail to see the mynah, cocks, ,herons the scenery outside etc.Life is too short we need to enjoy nature too.
Totally agree chitra
DeleteLovely poem with a great picture!
ReplyDeleteGood Morning,Ashok!I feel better trough your words...and your picture!
ReplyDeleteSuch wonderful words associated with an equally wonderful part of the day.. thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteso beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written.
ReplyDeleteDawn is always a joy since it brings in new hopes,opportunities and a chance to accomplish our aims. It is also a most difficult time to get up and start moving to do our days jobs. Your description of dawn is very charming and you have beautifully highlighted to magical moments of dawn. I enjoyed your poem.
ReplyDeleteJoseph
Totally agree..Thank you sir!
DeleteMy favorite time of the day ~ I like how you captured the morning dew and animals by the window scene ~ Lovey work ~
ReplyDeleteBeautiful picture. I love that first bit of light when I stir from a good sleep. Still calm and peaceful. I enjoyed your poem.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this. Ignore the mobile!
ReplyDeleteI wish I could ignore it :(
Deletelovely words...nicely crafted lines & the photo
ReplyDeleteA lovely dawn a new hope.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful this is!
ReplyDeleteAshok,
ReplyDeleteYou are so creative and talented! I love this poem and can close my eyes and capture that feeling of just awaking on a beautiful day. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks Carol...
DeleteI think the jazz metaphor is quite apt. And coffee in bed is a great way to start the day, lol. Very good rhythm and meter here too. Kudos.
ReplyDeleteIt could be dawn over the mountains where I live. The sky is universal and that is a good thought.
ReplyDeleteLove your poem...and your blog
i can see why it's one of your favourites, such a lovely poem, so full of vivid images. and i can understand about the chemistry class. :D
ReplyDeleteFinally, someone who shares my view on Chemistry classes :) !
Deletewhen i saw the title my thought sinked with different aspect,but while reading yours the angle is totally different & beautiful poem ashok! :)
ReplyDeletewonderful lines!am jealous!!
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