Penning Poetry is the smoothest thing
Like the flapping of a swan’s wing
In metered rhythm the verses sing-
The moment I break my inner ring!
All I need – an endless sky
Where I spread my thoughts and fly
As I soar on an emotional high
Words pour and shape my inner cry!
photo: Bangalore 2007
poetry is almost impossible for me :(
ReplyDeleteWonderful rhythm and writing!
ReplyDeleteore rhyming than po.
ReplyDeleteenna acho pavam intha paiyan.
Prabu Ganapathy
Touching.
ReplyDeleteyour poems are as wonderful as your architecture.
ReplyDeletelovely words...nicely crafted lines along with the photo!
ReplyDeleteHi Ashok,
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines ...
And your architecture, amazing !!
Amazing thoughts wonderfully expressed.
ReplyDeleteNice.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem to go with this lovely image.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love the quick beat to this poem. :)
ReplyDeleteVery true on the emotional high and inner cry! words and thoughts rose when highly emotional.
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