The day is dragging to an end
The pen is losing ink.
The journey on the final bend
The ship is eager to sink.
The trophies that once spoke his fame;
Now faded, jaded in rust.
Memories frozen in photo frame;
Forgotten - gathering dust.
Metal and paper saved in bank;
His life times labor and toil.
Hardly matter and add to blank
when it’s time to hit the soil.
The candle melts by his bedside;
An ominous flickering flame.
His wall clock ticks and waits to decide;
There’s no winner in this game.
Excellent!!
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DeleteYou make it seem as poetry writing is very easy. I know how difficult it is. Very soulful and deep. Metal and paper in the bank.. so true!
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DeleteWonderful composition Ashok! Truly inspiring!
ReplyDeletethanks Jeevan
DeleteWords true...
ReplyDeleteWords, meaning and rhythm so perfect,
Ashok!
thanks rita
DeleteWell written...
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DeleteHappy Diwali to you
ReplyDeletethanks deeps
DeleteYep, I feel it.
ReplyDeletethanks Annie
DeleteHappy Deepavali to all my friends!
ReplyDeleteVery true lines... Happy Diwali to u too...
ReplyDeletethanks Vineeta
DeleteHow clever of you, this just about sums up my mood at the moment. My best wishes for a happy Diwali to you and yours also.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot :)
DeleteHi Ashok:) Full of emotions. I love it!
ReplyDeletethanks renate
DeleteWonderful, as always, Ashok!!!
ReplyDeletethanks Hmuxo
DeleteIt is an emotional saga, the thoughts could be mine some day.. lovely Ashok!
ReplyDeletethanks Padma
DeleteI love the clouds Ashok.
ReplyDeleteme too Bob
Deleteyour poem is beautiful as is the sky!
ReplyDeletethanks Pat
DeleteYou are really talented.
ReplyDeletethank you
DeleteVery introspective!
ReplyDeleteyes Rakesh
DeleteVery true and well written words !!!
ReplyDeletethanks U
DeleteThis is Deepawali time! Be happy always, Ashok! Happy Deepawali to you and your family!
ReplyDeleteIam happy Sandhya...thanks :)
DeleteMeaningful and loved the hard emotion in its simplicity .The third stanza ,true and the best
ReplyDeletethanks Madrasi!
DeleteSo nicely written, the end of this life, always sad. I like the realization here that the things considered important are ultimately not. I always enjoy reading your words.
ReplyDeletethanks Myrna.
DeletePowerful and so very true!
ReplyDeletethanks Carol
DeletePerceptions!
ReplyDeletethanks magiceye
DeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeletethanks Linda
Deletethis is what life is all about. We spend so much in accumulating wealth and no one requires it when one leaves the world..
ReplyDeleteGood message.
thanks Chitra
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ReplyDeletethanks RR
DeleteWOW you are a great poet , too...pure wisdom !
ReplyDeletethanks Jane
Delete"when its time to hit the soil" - oh, Ashok - this line will stay with me. As will this poem.
ReplyDeletethanks Susan
DeleteLovely write!
ReplyDeletethanks Ayala
DeleteThis is wonderful, Ashok, and such a beautiful image!
ReplyDeletethanks Lisa
DeleteWords fail me. What can i say about it?
ReplyDeleteYour lines touch me, you bring out the truth in it.
There is no winner in this game.
But lets be a good player and enjoy the same.
wonderful comment D
DeletePoignant wordings with a meaningful picture.Touched my heart.
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