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| Time, Poster color on Paper- art by ashok |
Freaking, fleeing like frightened prey.
With every tick the clock says,
"Beware!
Numbered is your noisy fray".
Eternal race, here no one stays;
Passing Puppets in this phony play.
Colors melt and fall into grays;
When
the countdown ends– wither away!
The mind thinks in surreal ways;
Realizing not the impending slay.
Shunning, running from the moral rays;
Awake!
O! Frivolous, fleeting, living clay!
our days are numbered, no matter what.
ReplyDeleteoh, and that artwork is really great!
ReplyDeletethanks TWG
DeleteWonderful Ashok. Hope we all awaken before our time is up.
ReplyDeleteyes Myrna!
DeleteVery intersting poem!
ReplyDeletethanks Beth
DeleteTime flies. Love the poem and the accompanying artwork. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteyes, thanks Carol
DeleteWonderful writing again!
ReplyDeletethanks Ind
DeleteFantastic poem and art ashok!
ReplyDeletethanks Jeevan
Deletehi Ashok ... a fabulous art work ... loved it.
ReplyDeletethanks !!
DeleteWritten well...
ReplyDeletethanks angel
DeleteWonderful artwork, Ashok!
ReplyDeletethanks judy
DeleteHey Ashok:) To be a bit shorter than you are: Live is over before you know it! Love the art:)
ReplyDeletethanks renate
DeleteWonderful artwork and the poem is very nice..something to think about!!
ReplyDeletethanks Hmuxo
DeleteThe horses are beautiful, Ashok and the poem too!
ReplyDeletethanks Sandhya
DeleteWonderful write.
ReplyDeletethanks ayala
DeleteEternal race, here no one stays..... and thats what it is, precisely!
ReplyDeletethanks Rakesh
Deletewell written and art is also excellent
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thanks krish
Deletepicture is perfect..
ReplyDeletethanks Renu
DeleteWonderful art work !!!
ReplyDeleteBravo Ashok !!!
Have a nice and creative week !!!
thanks AT
DeleteTrue words! Time and tide wait for none:)
ReplyDeletethanks Rahulji
DeleteNo amount of appreciation can do justice to your talent!
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thanks anu
DeleteBeautiful art to go with equally beautiful verses.
ReplyDeletethanks Kavita
DeleteYou painted so well...
ReplyDeletethanks Vineeta
DeleteSo, is this in the event of the Dec21st 2012 ;) ?
ReplyDelete" Awake!
O! Frivolous, fleeting, living clay!" --My fav line! just punches in the message so well!
my fav line too D!
DeleteYou have the most amazing mind, my friend. I love your poetry!
ReplyDeletethanks Pat
DeleteLOVE - the poem and the poster. You have a stunning way with words.
ReplyDeletethanks Susan
DeleteYou are so creative and original. I like the artwork and the message that it conveys so beautifully, and then the poem is like an extra bonus gift! The words paint their own artwork too. Very artistically composed and presented!
ReplyDeletethanks Kat
DeleteVery interesting piece. Great imagination.
ReplyDeletethanks Nora
Deletethanks ashwini
ReplyDeleteI think this one is rather special. The painting I like too. Usually I like the painting better than the poem but this one has me admitting I like both of them very much
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