Jan 4, 2013

My Poetry


















When they’re bold
They’ll make you freeze.
When they’re cold
They’ll make you sneeze.

When they’re easy
They’ll feel like grease.
When they’re crazy
They’ll cut the cheese.

When they’re soulful
Your heart they’ll squeeze.
When they’re joyful
You’ll feel the breeze.

When they’re profound
They’ll bring you peace.
When they propound
You’ll bend your knees.

When they’re livid
You’ll wilt and wheeze.
When they’re vivid
They’re Nirvana’s keys!

23 comments:

  1. The photo is astounding Ashok.

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  2. Love the photo. And what you say is true about your poetry. One thing is missing - it's always good.

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  3. Enjoyed the photo and your rhyming words ~

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  4. Nice picture or is it a painting? Beautiful!

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  5. I love the picture and the poem!

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  6. LOVE that photo, Ashok...and your poetry is excellent!

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  7. good one Ashok. I too love the picture..

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  8. What a perfect picture to accompany your verse, is it one of yours?

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    1. yes, I took this pic from a private jet

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  9. Thanks everyone for your appreciative comments!

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  10. Wonderful pic and I liked the rhyming here :-)

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  11. rhyming :):) simple yet thoughtful poem Ashok!

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  12. hi ashok,i didnt get those point "When they’re crazy
    They’ll cut the cheese." can you explain it? nice concept you have chosen.

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