When they’re bold
They’ll make you freeze.
When they’re cold
They’ll make you sneeze.
When they’re easy
They’ll feel like grease.
When they’re crazy
They’ll cut the cheese.
When they’re soulful
Your heart they’ll squeeze.
When they’re joyful
You’ll feel the breeze.
When they’re profound
They’ll bring you peace.
When they propound
You’ll bend your knees.
When they’re livid
You’ll wilt and wheeze.
When they’re vivid
They’re Nirvana’s keys!
Congrats !
ReplyDeleteThe photo is astounding Ashok.
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteLove the photo. And what you say is true about your poetry. One thing is missing - it's always good.
ReplyDeletethanks Myrna :)
DeleteEnjoyed the photo and your rhyming words ~
ReplyDeletethanks G
DeleteProfound poetry !
ReplyDeleteNice picture or is it a painting? Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLike...
ReplyDeleteI love the picture and the poem!
ReplyDeleteLOVE that photo, Ashok...and your poetry is excellent!
ReplyDeletegood one Ashok. I too love the picture..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.. Ashok...
ReplyDeleteBrilliant!
ReplyDeleteWhat a perfect picture to accompany your verse, is it one of yours?
ReplyDeleteyes, I took this pic from a private jet
Deleteawesome poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for your appreciative comments!
ReplyDeletethanks Ashwini
ReplyDeleterhyming :):) simple yet thoughtful poem Ashok!
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ReplyDeletehi ashok,i didnt get those point "When they’re crazy
They’ll cut the cheese." can you explain it? nice concept you have chosen.
'Cut the cheese' is a slang that means 'to fart'///here i have used the phrase to mean that ' my poetry can reach crazy limits to raise up issues that can virtually stink'
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