 |
On the floor lies
A forgotten heart
A crumpled tissue
Used and discarded
Lifeless,
Loveless,
Red.
I take it in my hand
Straighten the wrinkles
Scribbled all over
A tale Blotted with
Tears,
Fears,
Blood
I tear it to bits
And throw it up
The wind carries off
As I walk on…
Hopeless,
Heartless,
Dead…
Great emotion in these words. good job!
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful. Such a few words had me on the edge of my seat. Love it.
ReplyDeleteSad...powerful!
ReplyDeletePregnant with deep meaning.
ReplyDeleteLovely...
ReplyDeleteLovely lines...but this time without picture ???
ReplyDeleteadded the picture for you Vineeta :)
DeleteOh my goodness, so sad.
ReplyDeleteawesome...
ReplyDeleteMarvelous poem, beautiful words, sweet and sad.
ReplyDeleteHi Ashok:) Very emotional. I think everyone has a moment that fits. Gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteOh my! That's into a sad, heart breaking poem. :(
ReplyDeleteBut really well written! :)
Indian Fashion n Travel Blogger! - Bhusha's INDIA TRAVELOGUE
Sad, nicely worded.
ReplyDeletesimple but soulful poetry! keep writing!
ReplyDeletesimple but soulful expression keep writing!
ReplyDeleteSoulful:(
ReplyDelete