“You write about the beauty of the moon!
Hey poet, do you realize
that
The light is mine?” –The
Sun…
“You sing about the beauty
of the rain!
Hey poet, do you realize
that
The water is mine?” – The
Cloud…
“You pen about the beauty of
the river!
Hey Poet, do you realize
that
The source is mine?” – The
Mountain…
“You praise about the beauty
of the flower!
Hey poet, do you realize
that
The hard work is mine? – The
Plant
The Poet realized.
But God just smiled….
oh, i LOVED this!
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteVERY NICE :)
ReplyDeleteHello Ashok:) Very clever:) I love it! Have a nice week:)
ReplyDeleteI love the beauty and simplicity in this. And God is smiling.
ReplyDeleteHave a great day Ashok.
Thank you for kindness of the words
ReplyDeleteand the smile of God!
Have a great week, Ashok!
Cant help thinking that this would be even impressive in Tamil :)
ReplyDeleteSimple but out of the box thoughts. Very nice...
Thanks D...Can you translate this for me into Tamil?
DeleteHey poet, am sure you realise the world is a beautiful place. There is nothing more thats required ! :)
ReplyDeleteTrue Kavi!
DeleteYou paint pictures so magical, dear poet..... but do you realize that those words are mine? -- Ashok's brain ;-)
ReplyDeletehaha!
DeleteWow...Good one...
ReplyDeleteYou play with words nicely!
ReplyDeleteVery true and very touching lines...
ReplyDeleteSo natural spring in your words! Just beautiful ashok :)
ReplyDeleteGood poem, cheers.
ReplyDeleteNature is our inspiration ~
ReplyDeleteLovely poem!
ReplyDeleteA really fabulous poem!
ReplyDeleteLove this!
ReplyDeleteFabulous Ashok!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful image to set up a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteA profound truth conveyed through a simple and elegant poem, a gentle reminder to all of us creative people that anything that we think we create is already His creation ,nothing can match His work, we are obligated to realize and remember that all the time. Beautiful job Ashok!
ReplyDeletewell said Padmaja
DeleteHey poet do you realize that you are one awesome poet? :)
ReplyDeletereally? thanks Sui :)
Deletebaapre simple superb yar
Deletesimply superb:)
ReplyDeleteThanks RR
DeleteThanks Ashwini
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words! :)
ReplyDeleteHey poet,
ReplyDeleteYou love the glitter of diamond,
You know they come from coalmine:) Nice one Ashok!
This is completely awesome, what more can I say...Love it!!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDelete:-)
ReplyDelete:) lovely!!
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