Oct 28, 2012

Realization...



“You write about the beauty of the moon! 
  
Hey poet, do you realize that 
  
The light is mine?” –The Sun… 
  
  
  
“You sing about the beauty of the rain! 
  
Hey poet, do you realize that 
  
The water is mine?” – The Cloud… 
  
  
  
“You pen about the beauty of the river! 
  
Hey Poet, do you realize that 
  
The source is mine?” – The Mountain… 
  
  
  
“You praise about the beauty of the flower! 
  
Hey poet, do you realize that 
  
The hard work is mine? – The Plant 
  
  
  
The Poet realized. 
  
But God just smiled…. 

38 comments:

  1. Hello Ashok:) Very clever:) I love it! Have a nice week:)

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  2. I love the beauty and simplicity in this. And God is smiling.

    Have a great day Ashok.

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  3. Thank you for kindness of the words
    and the smile of God!
    Have a great week, Ashok!

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  4. Cant help thinking that this would be even impressive in Tamil :)

    Simple but out of the box thoughts. Very nice...

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    1. Thanks D...Can you translate this for me into Tamil?

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  5. Hey poet, am sure you realise the world is a beautiful place. There is nothing more thats required ! :)

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  6. You paint pictures so magical, dear poet..... but do you realize that those words are mine? -- Ashok's brain ;-)

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  7. You play with words nicely!

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  8. Very true and very touching lines...

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  9. So natural spring in your words! Just beautiful ashok :)

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  10. Nature is our inspiration ~

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  11. A really fabulous poem!

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  12. Beautiful image to set up a beautiful poem.

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  13. A profound truth conveyed through a simple and elegant poem, a gentle reminder to all of us creative people that anything that we think we create is already His creation ,nothing can match His work, we are obligated to realize and remember that all the time. Beautiful job Ashok!

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  14. Hey poet do you realize that you are one awesome poet? :)

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    1. really? thanks Sui :)

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    2. baapre simple superb yar

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  15. Wow. This is one of your best poems Ashok :-) Too Good :-)

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  16. Beautiful words! :)

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  17. Hey poet,
    You love the glitter of diamond,
    You know they come from coalmine:) Nice one Ashok!

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  18. This is completely awesome, what more can I say...Love it!!

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