Oct 2, 2012

The Bitter Seeds...












Forlorn faces raining tears
Like murky monsoon clouds;
Tossed between hope and fears
Like children lost in crowds.

As fragile as an autumn leaf
That sways to the moody breeze;
A life docile that hangs in grief
Fallen even by a sleazy sneeze.

The bitter seeds buried in time
And watered by sweat and tears;
Will sprout one day from their bloody grime
And live a thousand years.

(Concluded.  -Continued from my previous post)

34 comments:

  1. I thought I missed many posts but i haven't , love your writing.

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  2. Very nice writing!

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  3. Oh my, so profound. Good job.

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  4. Very Nice Writing. Congrats.

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  5. a nice wrinting-)))
    good morning

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  6. Impressive and moving, Ashok!

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  7. Impressive lines Ashok...

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  8. Great lines again.
    You write well.

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  9. Well written and it gripping heart by sorrow! The last stanza leaves eternal imprint.

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  10. Its very moving Ashok. The agony is beyond imagination and you've expressed it in deep words.

    Regards,
    Anand
    Life's like that

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  11. You're a wonderful writer, Ashok!

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  12. wow...you write beautiful!!!!!
    Christa

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  13. You write powerfully.

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  14. Ciao, il tuo blog è sempre bello e ricco di umanità...con fantasia...
    Ciao, ciao, Floriana

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  15. Such thought provoking posts, thanks.

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  16. Soulful poetry, Ashok!

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  17. Hello Ashok,

    Lovely poem. very moving. Beautiful selection of words.

    Best wishes,
    Joseph

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  18. Oh, the last four lines.... To die for, man! Awesome...

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  19. Great work! Thank you so much for giving me the award. You're very kind!

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  20. You have a way of writing that strikes at the heart!

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  21. definitely a moving piece....particularly the seeds being reeped for so long in the end...

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  22. Not so happy moment.

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  23. lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  24. É muito triste... a imagem me transmite uma enorme agonia.

    Bom domingo!
    Boa semana!

    °º✿♫
    °º✿Beijinhos do Brasil.
    º° ✿♥ ♫° ·.

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  26. gripping writing saar

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  27. You are a very fine poet, Ashok.

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  28. Lovely words , Ashok!

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