Forlorn faces raining tears
Like murky monsoon clouds;
Tossed between hope and fears
Like children lost in crowds.
As fragile as an autumn leaf
That sways to the moody breeze;
A life docile that hangs in grief
Fallen even by a sleazy sneeze.
That sways to the moody breeze;
A life docile that hangs in grief
Fallen even by a sleazy sneeze.
The bitter seeds buried in time
And watered by sweat and tears;
Will sprout one day from their bloody grime
And live a thousand years.
And watered by sweat and tears;
Will sprout one day from their bloody grime
And live a thousand years.
(Concluded. -Continued from my previous post)
I thought I missed many posts but i haven't , love your writing.
ReplyDeleteNice one.
ReplyDeleteVery nice writing!
ReplyDeleteOh my, so profound. Good job.
ReplyDeleteVery Nice Writing. Congrats.
ReplyDeleteSir,
Please visit this Link if time permits & leave your valuable comments.
http://blogintamil.blogspot.in/2012/10/blog-post_2.html
VGK
Very moving!
ReplyDeletea nice wrinting-)))
ReplyDeletegood morning
Impressive and moving, Ashok!
ReplyDeleteImpressive lines Ashok...
ReplyDeleteGreat lines again.
ReplyDeleteYou write well.
Well written and it gripping heart by sorrow! The last stanza leaves eternal imprint.
ReplyDeleteIts very moving Ashok. The agony is beyond imagination and you've expressed it in deep words.
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Anand
Life's like that
You're a wonderful writer, Ashok!
ReplyDeletewow...you write beautiful!!!!!
ReplyDeleteChrista
You write powerfully.
ReplyDeleteCiao, il tuo blog è sempre bello e ricco di umanità...con fantasia...
ReplyDeleteCiao, ciao, Floriana
Such thought provoking posts, thanks.
ReplyDeleteSoulful poetry, Ashok!
ReplyDeleteHello Ashok,
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. very moving. Beautiful selection of words.
Best wishes,
Joseph
Nicely written...
ReplyDeleteOh, the last four lines.... To die for, man! Awesome...
ReplyDeletebitter sweet
ReplyDeleteGreat work! Thank you so much for giving me the award. You're very kind!
ReplyDeleteYou have a way of writing that strikes at the heart!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem.
ReplyDeletedefinitely a moving piece....particularly the seeds being reeped for so long in the end...
ReplyDeleteNot so happy moment.
ReplyDeletelovely words...nicely crafted lines!
ReplyDeleteÉ muito triste... a imagem me transmite uma enorme agonia.
ReplyDeleteBom domingo!
Boa semana!
°º✿♫
°º✿Beijinhos do Brasil.
º° ✿♥ ♫° ·.
its such a nice blog to provides info
ReplyDeletehope more people discover your blog because you really know what you’re talking about. Can’t wait to read more from you!
for more plz visit
mis sold ppi claim
mis sold ppi claim
gripping writing saar
ReplyDeleteYou are a very fine poet, Ashok.
ReplyDeleteLovely words , Ashok!
ReplyDeleteits such a nice blog to provides info
ReplyDeletehope more people discover your blog because you really know what you’re talking about. Can’t wait to read more from you!
for more plz visit
mis sold ppi claim
PPI Refund Claim