The Tree- digital art by ashok |
I have a place for me;
For me alone to rest;From there I could see,
the birds over their nest.
A stream clatters, chatters by;
Where happy fishes swim;
It makes my spirit go high;
Spurting over the brim.
I have a place for me;
A place for me to sleep;
In the shade of a tree,
Sheltered form the cloud’s weep;
From there I see a majestic hill
Crowned gold by sun at dawn;
I see a lake stagnant and still,
From the place I was born.
I have a place for me;
For me alone to play and sing;
Just like a busy buzzing bee;
I only lack its wing.
The wine in the air makes me lull,
Amidst the flowers- red and yellow;
Tis a place so sweet, never ever dull,
Where the green grasses-my bed & pillow!
[One of my my oldest surviving school day poems, written in 1989]
[One of my my oldest surviving school day poems, written in 1989]
lovely poem Ashok... nice meaning... brilliant art...
ReplyDeleteI wish to born there… excellent poem and loved the creative tree from yours.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful art.
ReplyDeleteyes boss..bob is right:)
ReplyDelete@Kalai - Thanks for ur visit.
ReplyDelete@Jeevan- that will be everybody's dream i guess..thanks!
@Bob-Thanks
@Ramesh- Thanks boss!
nicely written :)
ReplyDeleteAdn this was your earliest...! Wow !
ReplyDeleteWhat a *treasure* it is and I love the art!
ReplyDelete1989!!! incredible
ReplyDeleteloved the rhyme
Nice poem. Wonderful art too.
ReplyDeleteSimple words. Beautiful happy poem. Nice work. :)
ReplyDelete@Shreya - Thanks
ReplyDelete@Kavi - Not my earliest. Surviving earliest:)
@Fiona- Thanks
@Sujatha- Thanks
@Mary- Thanks
@Dee- simple words,yes.I must try to write with simple words agan:)thanks
Very beautiful poem. Enjoyed !
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