digital art by ashok |
For I have works left undone;
Show not your deep dark face for me to see
thou this world be a burden.
Never err to trow I fear you;
T’is not for fear I ask you to lurk.
I would‘ve hugged you days ago,
Had I done my life’s work;
And when I have carved my name,
In the very highest of the peaks;
And won a bagful of fame,
To become someone, someone proudly speaks:
Let then your cold hands touch my chest;
For then I’ll be needing, seeking, rest...
[another one of my school day poems, written in 1991...probably my first attempt on a Sonnet!]
A wonderful, profound and very beautiful first attempt at a sonnet! The blue artwork is awesome ~ thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteGood one...Love the way you write.
ReplyDeletebeautiful....
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@Fiona & Chitra- Thanks
ReplyDelete@Deepak- Done!
Great sonnet - very profound!
ReplyDeleteSuperb.
ReplyDeleteFirst attempt....really a good one. The art work is beautiful too.
ReplyDeletethis and the last poem were very good ... nice metre in the lines
ReplyDeletewhat did you do the digital art with É what software, i meant.
Your poetic expressions are awesome!!! Love your writings... and not bad at all for a first attempt at a sonnet tht too during school days :)great!!
ReplyDeleteSuch a nice one...
ReplyDeleteGreat!!
dat digital art was awesome..
ReplyDeletethanks 4 ur wonderful comment...
Another good poem !
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful, Ashok. A wonderful write, a wonderful read!
ReplyDelete@Ladyfi , Bob, Venus, Soma, Kalaiselvi, R.Ramakrishnan, Camille, Dee - Thanks !
ReplyDelete@Deepa- thats a combination of MS paint and Photoshop.
Nice one :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done, Ashok. An amazing write, a great read! Love it!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely loved it. Thanks for sharing the link.
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