Great emotion in these words. good job!
How beautiful. Such a few words had me on the edge of my seat. Love it.
Pregnant with deep meaning.
Lovely lines...but this time without picture ???
added the picture for you Vineeta :)
Oh my goodness, so sad.
Marvelous poem, beautiful words, sweet and sad.
Hi Ashok:) Very emotional. I think everyone has a moment that fits. Gorgeous!
Oh my! That's into a sad, heart breaking poem. :(But really well written! :)Indian Fashion n Travel Blogger! - Bhusha's INDIA TRAVELOGUE
Sad, nicely worded.
simple but soulful poetry! keep writing!
simple but soulful expression keep writing!